Introduction to Media Writing, Maryville University

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Sunday, April 19, 2009

The Final Inch by Irene Taylor Brodsky.
This Documentary follows the lives of a few different people, in different parts of the world who have all had different experiences with polio. The main focus is on the widespread of the disease in certain cities in India, and the foot soldiers going around trying to bring the vaccine to the children of these cities.

It also gives some insight to the disease and how it has affected America and interviews a couple of the people that lived through the disease.
One woman has survived in an Iron Lung for the last 60 years. She explains how it's not a great life to live and how she would speak to anyone who didn't want the vaccination and convince them to get it.



The other American man is paralyzed from the waist down and is riding a hand-bike over 900 miles across the state of Texas to promote Polio awareness.


The entire story is fascinating about how prejudice the Indian people are toward the vaccine because it's possibility of being invented by Americans. It brings about a lot of controversy but does a great job and promoting awareness for the disease and those who are trying to help contain it. It's a truly sad but absolutely beautiful story. I really would reccomend it to anyone who cares about things like this, as I do.

Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Documentary: Lakshmi and Me

Nishtha Jain is a middle-class professional who likes all contemporary expediencies because she feels that they promote femininity.  When she was young, she refused to learn the cultural ways of her mother unless her brothers did the same.  She claims that she was “born a feminist.”  As soon as she moved out on her own, she hired a maid so that she wouldn’t have to do the housework.  She didn’t want to follow the stereotypical ways of women in Mumbai, India culture.  Jain decided to create a documentary, which she directed herself, about her personal relationship with her maid, Lakshmi, and her own developing feelings towards social groups, rankings and freedom for women.  In the film, Jain also focuses on Lakshmi’s life and the struggles that she as to overcome on a daily basis because of her social class and because she is a woman.

Today, one might be shocked that India’s people are still predestined by the caste system.  However, if you are a professional woman in India, you aren’t expected to do household tasks, but you are expected to have a bai to do it for you.  A bai woman in India is one who comes from a lower class background and is expected to do nothing but housework.  This shows that even though women are seemingly gaining power in the world, they are actually losing some power because they are still using other women to do their “womanly” chores and responsibilities.

I believe the main argument that this documentary is expressing is that people, especially women, need to come together as a whole and stop letting ancient traditions and social norms keep them apart.  In order for women to continually gain equality, rights and power, they need to look past the cultural norms, social classes and backgrounds and work together in a way that is beneficial to all.    

Monday, April 13, 2009

Extra Credit- sources

I found my scholarly source at http://web.ebscohost.com/ehost/pdf?vid=3&hid=108&sid=55233a42-938d-4dd6-8a33-d8fc38132ee%40sessionmgr103. This source gave a breakdown of the precautionary measures one should consider when dealing with electricity. The facts provided within this article discussed the safety elements of electricity whether you are at home or on the job, in addition to whether you were a grown adult trying to protect your home and especially as a parent trying to teach your children about the importance of safely handling electrical devices. The facts outlined in the article are very alarming to readers. However, the truth needs to be understood in order for everyone to understand the dangers of electricity and learn from other’s tragic mistakes and accidents. This article could really help anyone learn about the importance of practicing electrical safety in order to save your life and the lives of loved ones.

My popular culture source was found at http://www.rp-l.com/electricsafety.htm. This website was awesome! It was both kid friendly and parent friendly. It offered everything from safety tips, games to learn about electricity, the makings of electricity, what causes lightning, and so much more. What’s so great about this website is the easy to follow and understand format for both children and parents. A website that can target and interest both kids and adults was very clever in its’ making. This was an inspirational website as we developed all of the aspects of our project campaign.

Sunday, April 5, 2009

Documentaries--

This is a documentary that made over 170 million at the box office.  It wasn't attacking any institution or idea, but simply documenting this fascinating trek these penguins take in order to breed.  Possibly highlighting the effects of global warming.


The climate crisis is a huge problem that many don't think twice about.  This is something that has been known for quite a while, but not take very seriously.  This next documentary brought a spotlight to a global threat that reached a vast audience who was possibly hearing about this for the first time.  


A documentary film is a video that attempts, in some way, to document reality. Even though the scenes are carefully chosen and arranged, they are not scripted, and the people in a documentary film are not actors. Sometimes, a documentary film may rely on voice-over narration to describe what is happening in the footage; in other films, the footage will speak for itself. Often, a documentary film will include interviews with the people in the film.


Michael Moore has made a name for himself by doing these types of films. Fahrenheit 911 is a solid example of this.















But many other documentaries have become very well-known recently, including Super Size Me and An Inconvenient Truth.

Sunday, March 22, 2009

Skin cancer PSA'S

This is an unique way to highlight the danger of skin cancer and the sun. They highlight the glamorous side of
tanning and yet what it can do to you. Instead of preaching about wrinkles and cell damage, it reaches a broader and possibly
younger audience by using a music video format. Going further its similar to a modern day hip-hop video, with booty-shakin
and girls in bikinis. And to top it off, it is hilarious, which always grabs more attention than simply stating facts.


This is more of an informational PSA
that is very serious. It gives you a few facts
and puts the ugliness of the disease in your face.

Both of these blogs are extremely effective but strike different
chords with people.

New media vs old media

1- http://www.pbs.org/mediashift/2006/08/spelling-out-the-media-shift222.html. This website offers a philosophy piece on the media shifting from old to new. Along with a blog at the bottom asking for viewer feedback. The writer Mark Glaser gives what I believe to be great examples of how the media has been transitioning throughout the years. I also believe that many other Americans are seeing and following these changing trends within the media. Overall very helpful source for our project, not only do we get the viewpoint of the writer but many other Americans viewpoint and ideas on how the media is shifting from old to new.

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http://web.ebscohost.com/ehost/pdf?vid=4&hid=120&sid=15606270-a66e-40f8-a293-02fee5ab1544%40sessionmgr108. This newspaper article written by Reid Goldsboroug in October 2005 was very honest about what’s underneath the transitioning from old media to new media. Although the information seemed to me to be a “no-brainer” on trusting what you find out on the internet/new media outlet. Reid still implied that old media can’t vary well not exist anymore yet because of needing to have reliability factor for individuals. Reid quoted, “I’d argue that old paid media generally more reliable then new free media. Because professionals are paid, they’re accountable, and if they fall in fulfilling their duties they’re gone.” I would definitely agree with that, yeah I like having the internet at my fingertips whenever I need information for an assignment or just for personal interest, but I also take that information with a grain of salt. Is it really the truth or someone making it the truth? This source would be great for all my members to read so we can improve our new media aspect on the project but still not fail our old media.

Tobacco and Alcohol!?!?!

http://www.thetruth.com/

This is the website for the Truth campaigns that have been swirling the nation for a couple of years now and they are all over the place. You see them on tv, online, newspapers, and pretty much anywhere you can. The truth campaigns are trying to get the word out on how bad tobacco is for everyone and how many people die from it on a daily basis. You see all the commercials and they are all very clever and actually get you to think about what the point they are trying to make. But what you may have not seen is the website itself and the image they are putting out. If you look really hard and break it down like we usually do with the websites we see, you will see that this website is mainly directed towards the younger crowd and not the older crowd. What you will find is that the images and cartoons that are on there are very childish and draw the attention of younger people. Not to say that younger kids always go on the website to look at how bad the tobacco is that they are smoking. Even watching the commercials you will see that they are drawing to a younger crowd. For instance, if you remember the commercial they brought out with the guy playing the roll of a stuffed animal and talking to the younger kids. That is exactly what they are trying to do even if it does or does not work.

http://www.abc.net.au/reslib/200811/r316163_1400575.jpg

So I found a very interesting picture online and it is from the Australian government and it's a girl who is obvisously at a party and has done some binge drinking and has passed out through a glass table and has a bunch of cuts on her upper body. What is interesting is the fact that above the girl who is passed out is facts that say that 1 out of every 4 hospitalized people aged 15-24 are due to alcohol. Now first of all that is a very interesting stat about Australia to begin with. This either means they have a lot of underaged drinking or that these kids just don't know when to quit. I also thought it was weird that the government brought this to the attention of the people so openly because some would think that they should be doing something about this and not just puttin the stats out there. Something to think about.

Anti Drunk-Driving Campains.

One of the most interesting, hilarious ideas for a anti-drunk driving campaign was one that I found on a blogging site for Stanford University. It was just an idea, but using talking urinal cakes in the men's restrooms as bars is a great way to promote safe driving. Using a women's voice and telling men to find a sober ride right around closing time is a great way to make them thing twice about getting in the car. Because it's usually not a thought to those who regularly drink and drive. But just having that last little "hey, think about it" going on, will make many change their minds. But this is a student campaign idea....






The next idea I found to go with the anti-drunk driving campaigns is sponsored byNational as well as State Governments around the nation, including Mo DOT. The campaign puts up billboards around the state of Missouri, as well as Television ads and magazine articles. They portray images of death and jail time, mainly the worst parts a drunk driving experience. The website brings about the more formal aspect of the campaign, including the laws.







Anti-smoking Campaigns

I found a few really interesting anti-smoking campaigns. The one that I found that's directed towards keeping kids away from smoking is really compelling. It has a website that uses links to organize the different ways of helping spread the campaign information. You can also donate to the cause via the website. It has many pictures as well as press releases. It also can focus on the state one lives in and how they can help the cause from a specific area of the United States.


The other site I found is a much more commonly known. If you watch TV at all in the last 5 years of so, you've most likely seen the Truth Commercials. The website is just as controversial as the commercials tho. It gives viewers a chance to blog about the commercials, website, and intentions.


Both sites target a completely different audience but portray a similar meaning. Both give viewers the option to get more involved, but the Children's Anti-smoking site is more easily accessible to get involved with. They're both very interesting campaigns for those who are into public safety and health. Lung disease and smoking have been very important aspects of health campaigns over the last 10 years and these 2 sites, as well as many more sites, prove how important it is and helps people get involved.

Health Campaign

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aAnMLpdbG4Y

I decided to take a look at how different types of public service announcements can get your attention. I personally like the ones that take a more fun approach to getting the point across. I am more likely to pay attention to something that catches my attention when it is funny, rather than being super serious, although, sometimes those leave a lasting impression as well, (i.e. the MADD psa’s leave a lasting, sad impact).
This PSA demonstates the need to used energy efficient products and the way they demonstrate that they are reducing energy is by using static electricity to power everything in the house. This is definately not a practical solution, however, it is a great demonstration of how being silly can get you to pay attention and consider alternatives to reduce the use of unnecessary electricity.

http://www.allacademic.com/meta/p112573_index.html

This site discussed the question, Do Emotional Appeals work? It was report done to find out what type of public service announcement has the most effect on people as it relates to getting them to stop smoking. The study discusses different campaigns that have worked. The “truth” campaigns that trigger an emotion were the focus of this paper. The PSA’s that evoked fear seemed to also make the responders angry.

I feel that for me personally, finding some humor in a serious topic is a better way to get me to react. Making me fearful also makes me angry and when I am afraid, and angry, I become non-responsive.

Public Safety Campaign Sources

I found my scholarly source at http://web.ebscohost.com/ehost/detail?vid=7&hid=103&sid=33d64flb-2bel-4844-93cl-7. This source had so much information to offer towards our project. In this article they conducted a study on 115 children ranging from age 7-11. The study gathered the children’s views on where electricity comes from. The interesting part about this study and the findings was the gender differences associated with the source of electricity. Girls were less likely than boys to identify what is considered a source of electricity and the connections between the generation of electricity and electrical appliances. All of the information found on this scholarly source will be very beneficial to our project even though our subject matter of our project is younger than the age of those children in the study. We can tie the findings of the study to the fact that our subject matter is a male gender. The reason for conducting the study related to educational alternatives for energy sources. It is obvious that children today are learning more at a younger age due to technology and educational curriculum.

My popular culture source was found at
http://www.myvideo/co.za/video/saving-electricity-with-brothers-streep. This video will help with the filming aspect of our project. Although this video wasn’t videotaping children, it was showing us footage of an in-home video and what can be done to make it look more appealing. When viewing this video, the camera angles, background, and sound were some of the key features that I thought would be helpful in making our project video. I also believe that having a video of taping children, such as the “Cooties” video shown in class, will also be very beneficial for our project.

Electricity Safety--New versus Old



A huge concern for parents over the past half century has been keeping their children safe in their own household. One way that this has been done is through the education of parents and children on electrical safety in homes. Today's education has changed greatly since that of the past. One of the ways it has changed is because of the Internet. This has led to more accessible and interactive education for both adults and children. A great example of this can be found at http://www.safeelectricity.org/esw_v1_2/index.html. This website offers fun and interactive ways for parents and their children to learn about the dangers of electricity and how to keep their home safe and sound. For children there are different games and learning sections that have cartoon characters and sound. For parents and teachers there are links and worksheets to learn more and to further educate their children. The benefit of this website is that it can be easily accessed from your home at anytime of day.


Before there was the Internet, electricity safety was spread in different methods. The most common ways were through word of mouth or through the newspaper. Although many people still get and read newspapers, it has taken a backseat to the Internet as the most used informative media source. A recent newspaper article about the subject of electricity safety can be found at http://www.thetelegraph.com/articles/electricity_9935___article.html/. This article informs us about a family that lost their child do to an electricity accident in the home. Now they are traveling around educating others on the danger of electricity for children in the home. This article informed many that there is a safety threat in each and every household of electricity if the home is not properly protected and the residents are not properly informed. Had the family been aware of the ways to educate themselves and children about the dangers of electrocution then this unfortunate accident could have been prevented. It is now the families mission to do everything they can to make sure people know about the dangers of electricity especially for children.

Saturday, March 21, 2009

New or Old - It still comes down to the right channels for the audience

Kaiser/Ad Council

Journal of Health Communication

Mass media campaigns have long had tremendous power to promote public health. In fact, the first “mass media” health campaign was conducted by Cotton Mather in the early 1700’s when he convinced early settlers that those that were inoculated against smallpox had greater survival rates. (Perhaps of interest to no one but me, Mather is also one of my direct ancestors!) However, it was the success of the Stanford Heart Disease Prevention Program (SHDPP) in the 60’s and 70’s that launched Health Communication as a specialty area. Health care campaigns are researched, planned and evaluated to a degree that many in traditional advertising and marketing would rarely do.

Creating and executing successful healthcare campaigns is a very complex aspect of mass media communication. Unlike selling a product or idea, Health care campaigns seek to change attitudes, beliefs and behaviors; which are theoretically much more difficult to change. That being said, campaign designers who adhere to effective campaign design are increasingly successful.

The most successful campaigns have been those that focus on adopting new behaviors rather than those that focus on preventing or eliminating problem behaviors. Campaigns with the greatest reach or exposure are the most effective, especially when there is a law enforcement element in the campaign. Mandatory seatbelt use and providing alcohol to minors are good examples of massive reach campaigns with law enforcement components.

An interesting finding in an evaluation of many health campaigns across many topics, audiences and channels is that it is much more difficult to obtain positive results for campaigns focused on youth behaviors whereas campaigns directed toward parents and adults tend to be more successful. This finding seems to refute the saying that, “you can’t teach an old dog new tricks!” Successful campaigns in health communication is determined by whether the campaign achieved the desired result by increasing knowledge, adopting the new behavior or eliminating bad behaviors in the target audience.

University of Kentucky Communications Professor, Seth Noar notes that there are principles of communication that, when used, will lead to more successful campaigns.

Conduct formative research with the target audience to clearly understand the behavior and the problem area. The type of research Dr. Noar is referring to goes far beyond the typical demographics and psychographics that we normally think of. He points out that audience segmentation by risk and personality characteristics is also important. Messages should be tailored for each segment to be sure they are effective.
Use theory as a conceptual foundation to the campaign. Use of the correct theory about your audience’ perceived risk and susceptibility will help determine the message.
Use a message design approach that is targeted to and likely to be effective with the audience segment; develop novel and creative messages; design messages that will spark interpersonal discussions and may also persuade individuals important to the target audience (e.g., influencers).
Place messages in channels widely viewed by the target audience; strategically position campaign messages within the selected channels. Message placement is almost as essential to campaign effectiveness as the message itself. Even the best message design cannot be effective if it is not seen.

Noar points out that very few health campaigns have relied on media only and most have used a variety of channels. This makes it hard to evaluate the effectiveness of each channel, but is likely to increase effectiveness. Speaking at a joint conference of the Kaiser Family Foundation and The Ad Council; Barbara Shimaitis, of the Ad Council agrees that integrated marketing communication is critical to an effective campaign and that campaigns must, “reach your target audience in their environment…. You really have to think a little bit outside the box, think opportunistically and creatively and hopefully you will be able to maximize your reach and effectiveness.” She adds that, “We have gone from a static, passive user engagement and viewing to a very interactive engagement with the user including social networking, video, user generated content and the like.

That being said, broadband penetration among all adults in the in the U.S. is less than 50%. For those with home internet access, approximately one fourth still use dial-up. If you are trying to reach a middle class or higher, urban population of any age, then some channels of new media such as blogs or on-line video are of great importance. If you are trying to reach an aging population; perhaps to increase knowledge of stroke symptoms or drug interaction risks, then new media is not likely to be very effective. If you are trying to reach an inner-city mother to increase knowledge of asthma symptoms and the use of asthma medications, you aren’t likely to use internet, but other guerilla or viral methods might be effective.

So the bottom line seems to be this. Whether you are marketing a new innovation or idea or attempting to change health related attitudes and behaviors you must still follow principles of marketing and advertising. You must do your formative research, know your target audience, choose your message carefully and place it carefully in media channels most used by your target audience. That increasingly includes new media such as internet, blogs, and guerilla and viral methods. But they should not be used just for the sake of using them. They must have a connection to your target audience and be appropriate for the message you are trying to convey.

Discussion of Sources for Second Group Project


Primary & Ambulatory Care Division, Australian Government Department of Health and Ageing. (2008). Background on the Campaign. Retrieved March 11, 2009, from: http://www.skincancer.gov.au/internet/skincancer/publishing.nsf/Content/background-1 

The Australian Government educates Australians about how important it is to protect them from skin cancer.  They especially focus on young people.  They promote multiple sun protection behaviors and aim to increase awareness about how serious the development of skin cancer is.  The campaign primarily targets adolescences from the age of 13 to 17 years of age and young adults from 18 to 24 years of age.  They target young people because they are the ones that have the tendency to get sunburn and they also have the worst sun protection behaviors.  This campaign is a beneficial source to our campaign because it shows how to target young people, which is primarily the largest target group for sun skin care.  The campaign gives great ideas on how to attract people’s attention such as short films, community service announcements, print advertisements and radio commercials.  One of the print ads was titled “Don’t Let Your Time in the Sun Catch Up with You” and was very graphic.  It had a close up of skin cancer and what someone’s skin would look like after skin cancer surgery.  This caught my attention because of how horrific it was. I think that real pictures of people who have had skin cancer surgery are disturbing, but defiantly let people see the side effects of the sun that they wouldn’t normally think about. 

Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. (2008). What CDC is Doing. Retrieved March 11, 2009, from: http://www.cdc.gov/cancer/skin/what_cdc_is_doing/ 

The Centers for Disease Control Prevention (CDC) provides direction for worldwide efforts to reduce illness and death caused by skin cancer. The CDC tells people “when in the sun, seek shade, cover up, get a hat, wear glasses, and use sunscreen.” The CDC helps incorporate skin cancer education into elementary schools and allows sun safety questions to be asked without any intimidation.  They also have a campaign for outdoor areas to be shaded, which I think would be an excellent idea for our campaign. For our campaign, shade shelters could be available at the concert, which would promote skin health care in addition to the sun block that would be passed out.

Thursday, March 12, 2009

The two blogs I am reviewing are The Mahatma X Files and Thoughts.com. Mahatma X Files is a blog by a Social Psychology Professor in Oklahoma.

Mahatma X Files


Thoughts.com

The Mahatma X Files blog is described as "Musings on all things political, as well as jazz, poetry, haiku, Bokononism, and whatever else happens to be on my mind." True to the description, the topics were very eclectic but I focused more on the political entries. The site itself seems visually confusing because there are so many other links and pictures, etc. They all relate and seem relevant but there are just so many directions that one is easily overwhelmed.

I found his writing to be easy to follow, with a logical flow and well supported arguments. Another element that I really liked was that all commentary by others that we wrote about was offset in text boxes so that you could easily distinquish between his writing and someone else's.

His style was distinquishable from normal journalistic writing because he went in depth to discuss current events, and true to his social psychology background, he discussed the background and consequences of the events and issues he was writing about. He also explains the viewpoints that are contrary to his own. This is an excellent approach to persuading others to your viewpoint. 1) It shows that you know and understand the opposing position. 2) It allows you to explain exactly what you agree with and disagree with. 3) You can defend your position even better by showing the flaws in the other arguments. While his blog writing is not academic writing, it is clearly written with academic principles in mind.

The other blog, Thoughts.com is, for the most part, an on-line diary for anyone to read. The posts are entirely random, as evidenced by the tag lists: Blog Broken Heart Children Christian Christianthoughts Christmas Cutting Dating Death Depression Family Friends Friendship Fun Funny God Health Heartbreak Incest Jesus Kids Life Love Matthyew Fritch Music Ngentot Pain Parents Philosophy Poem Poetry Politics Pro Ana Random Relationships Religion Sad School Sex Story Suicide Survey Test Thoughts Truth Twilight Unemployment Virtual Women Work

Contributors range from what appear to be professional writers to middle school girls sharing the drama of their day in the cafeteria. There do not appear to be any similarities between the subjects, contributors or writing styles from thoughts.com to Mahatmas X Files.

Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Blog Postings

I chose two websites that represented two ends of the spectrum. One was more of a personal blog, a look into this persons life. The things he found humorous and fun, the other was more of a news site that focused on what’s happening in the news, now.

I really enjoyed reading the personal aspect of the first website. I think I was first drawn to it because of it’s name, “A Cup of Jo”, as I am a coffee fiend and when I read the name, I was sure it was going to relate to different types of coffee, however, I was surprised when it wasn’t related to coffee at all. I liked that the left column of the page was a bunch of different links to other sites that may be of interest. http://www.joannagoddard.blogspot.com/

The second site was the news related site. Again, I was drawn to the site because of it’s name. Not that I’m a monkey fiend as well, but it sounded interesting to me. It was a site that focused on criminal cases and then when you read more of the blog story, it linked you to actual news websites. http://scaredmonkeys.com/

I enjoyed the personal aspect of the first site more than the news site. The news site took a sarcastic look at the crimes it was reporting, while the personal site was more zingy and up-beat. Both sites had links to other sites, which made me stay browsing longer than I normally would. I would be more likely to recommend the “Cup of Jo” site to my girlfriends and the “Scared Monkey’s” site to my male friends.

Contrast with blogging

The two blogs that I chose to contrast were The Chronicle of Higher Education, http://chronicle.com/news/ and 93.7 The Bull, http://www.thebullrocks.com/main.html. The Chronicle of Higher Education site contains information regarding higher education news from around the web, while The Bull is a radio station that plays country music.

These blog sites are different in many aspects. For instance, while each site communicates specific news and information, The Chronicle of Higher Education is a more formal and professional site tailored around education and learning, and The Bull’s website had more of an advertising focus which was more entertaining and fun. The Chronicle of Higher Education appears to have a target audience of professors and students, while the target audience of The Bull includes country music fans, both young and old. Another featured difference between the two sites is the cursor. On the Chronicle of Higher Education site, the cursor is the standard format, or more professional view of the cursor, which is the pointer finger. On The Bull, the cursor is customized to be the “rock on” sign which is the symbol of the thumb, pointer finger, and pinky finger.

Blogging on these two websites also included several differences. For example, anyone can blog on the Chronicle of Higher Education website. However, on The Bull’s site, viewers can only view blogs from the radio hosts but are not allowed to blog. The Chronicle of Higher Education blogs were more grammatically correct and professional compared to The Bull’s blogs which were more informal and resembled text messages.